tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8004612943634846837.post3557281918426866037..comments2012-05-29T21:54:54.586-07:00Comments on True Mexican Life: My History Playing FootballDannyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12666486112185503153noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8004612943634846837.post-46870499360902394962012-05-29T21:54:54.586-07:002012-05-29T21:54:54.586-07:00Daniel, I like your blog. It's a great idea f...Daniel, I like your blog. It's a great idea for practical homeschooling. It's real life too. I guess that's why I said it was "practical." :-) <br /><br />If you'd like any "educational feedback" on your writing, I'd be happy to help you with some corrections and maybe some ideas (probably not a lot of extra ideas...you're doing a very good job with your own style). If you'd like to improve on your grammar, I could help you a little. Your parents probably could too, but since I get paid to do that, I'd be happy to. If not, that's up to you. I won't be the "Grammar Police" and hound you by pointing out your mistakes. Believe me, I have better things to do with my time! <br /><br />I hope I'm not embarrassing you by writing his. I don't mean to. Everyone makes mistakes in their writing. I do all the time, but most of the errors I make by carelessness, not because I didn't know they were errors. <br /><br />Just thought I'd offer in case you would like some help. <br /><br />BTW, this post has a few things that could be better or that just need some correction/editing. There aren't too many though. You're writing well for a bilingual student. Good job. <br /><br />If you'd like some feedback, I would copy your writing/post, put it in an email or Word document with highlights or some way to make notes to point out the corrections. Reading them over should help you eliminate the same errors in the future and thus, help you become a better writer. At least, that's the idea. Let me know if you'd like this. Or have your dad/mom email me. They have my email address.<br /><br />Alan McManusAlanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01906985113510957753noreply@blogger.com